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	Chun Hyun Soo		2010-07-29

Many fans wear their national team suit and cheered.
And the support of their cheers Netherland and Spain national team
did good job

Adrianne;

2010-08-13

Ben,
Nice job reading and understanding the articles. I appriciate your hard work.

A few corrections.

You wrote:

"Many fans wear their national team suit and cheered.
And the support of their cheers Netherland and Spain national team
did good job"

Replace "suit" with "colors", and replace "And" with "with". Also, keep all your verbs in past tense. "wear" would be "wore"
Corrected it should read,

"Many fans wore their national team colors and cheered.
With the support of their cheers, the Netherland and Spain national teams did a good job"

Adrianne